|Title: "Clean a fish tank" First I take the fish out of the bowl. Second I put the fish in a clear bag. Last I put clean weather then I put the fish back in the bowl."|
|Title: "The Dirty Tank" First I take out the fish. Second I clean the tank. Third I took out rocks. Last I put the fish in the clean water.|
|Title: "Clean a Fish Aquarium" First I take out the fish. Then I clean the fish aquarium. Last I put the fish in.|
I'm proud of their writing, especially since this was the first time we really focused on using order words (either first, second, third or first, then, last). They did a great job!
What new writing ideas have you tried in your classroom?